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Dawn |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
 A perfect dawn comes every morn With crayon colors day is born Roosters must crow and songbirds sing Sparrows and Cardinals take wing. All nature in firstlight reborn. Our human spirit dreams adorn This twilight time when night is shorn From its dark gloom as Sun rays bring A perfect dawn. Deep, in our souls core, life forlorn, Awaits awakening oath sworn, We live today as seasons Spring Through Summer, Fall and Winters sting, Yet still to come that promise bourne, A perfect Dawn! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A Perfect Poem....full of excitement, hope, and wonder! Brightened my day! ARH  |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Well thank you Romantic Heart, dawn is so full of possibilities, Bloodline |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How wonderful that I choose to read this divinely inspired dawn poem as the first this morning. It is the perfect start into this new day. Ahhhhhhh .... Love, Margherita  |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Well, you know me being a morning person Bloodline, I must say I am completely awestruck by the beauty of this poem. A wonderful start of the day for me. Katriona |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I have the same reaction as the previous readers. This is exquisite! To be reading this even before the sun shows her face today is a magnificent treat! I'm keeping this.  It is one of those 'timeless beauties' I'd like to see gracing a nicely carved wood picture frame. Thank you, for sharing. |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Well Bloodline I think Heart2heart has someone looking for her nature poetry crown, wonderful piece you have written. Johan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May you awaken each day to a dazzling dawning such as this!!!  Love & Dawning Light, EA  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is just perfect, Bloodline. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bloodline, This is a very good poem/picture combination. Dawn is alway pretty everywhere. Love Bobby |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
LOved this one Mr. G....yes, it very much reminded me of watching the sun rise back in New England Huggs Jan |
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