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Trying To Hold It Together
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Trying To Hold It Together |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 Trying To Hold It Together What I was going through No words could express Whilst having to deal with The overwhelming stress During times such as this I became more stressed Its hard to cope right now I am not feeling my best Each worrisome situation Never giving me a break The stress is unrelenting What more could I take While fraught with anxiety Storms I had to weather I need to write something Trying to hold it together Hope ©2009 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my lovely Hope, I do hope all is well in your world... it does seem like it is not with this writing.. I will have good thoughts for you.. be well  RDB xxBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is so eloquently expressed, dear Hope, I am reminded of my own stressful situations. You have done well to write this piece, it will help "to hold it together". Yes, we must really try to focus on our inner peace, we can imagine it as a peaceful oasis, a serene meadow, a calm lake ... where we can recharge our batteries. Wishing you to succeed in solving all the stressful situations. Great job. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Well expressed, I always find when stressed is to make it into a poem as you have done, great writing. Johan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
even the picture tells it well~~ M |
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