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2islander2
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0 posted 2009-07-11 04:12 AM



It needs a lot of pride
to keep oneself simple.

Do not ask the apple tree
of oranges.

Do not ask the kisses
to make rich.

The pride burns
as the wood in the fireplace.

© Copyright 2009 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-07-11 04:31 AM


Dear Yann, your thoughts are gifts of deep value to our minds and you expressed them  beautifully.

So true!

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2009-07-11 05:48 AM


Merci Yann.. this is truly beautiful! xxRDBxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2009-07-11 12:57 PM


Yes, yann, it's a hot burn too ... crackling and snapping as it sparks.

Thank you, my friend - and, again, Happy Birthday.

xoxoxo
Alison

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-07-11 02:18 PM


Thank you Margherita for the sweet comment.

yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-07-11 02:19 PM


Thank youy roniece, always a pleasure reading about you. have a nice day

yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-07-11 02:20 PM


Thank you Alison for the expressive comment, I read it with pleasure...

have  anice day

yann

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7 posted 2009-07-11 04:19 PM


Wise thoughts, yann.
                    ida

Johan
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8 posted 2009-07-11 04:58 PM


Enjoyed reading your poetry.

Johan

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2009-07-11 07:52 PM


Yo Yann,

This poem is well put together.  I like it a lot.

Bobby

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-07-11 11:15 PM


2islander2 - deep thoughts, well done...

BC

LindsayP
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11 posted 2009-07-12 12:49 PM



A thought provoker this one Yann.

enjoyed.

Lindsay

2islander2
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12 posted 2009-07-12 03:25 AM


thanks you ida for the supportive comment.

have  a nice day

yann

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-07-12 03:26 AM


Thank you Yohan for the kind comment.
have a gentle day.

yann

2islander2
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14 posted 2009-07-12 03:27 AM


Thanks Bobby, enjoyed your comment.

yann

2islander2
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15 posted 2009-07-12 03:28 AM


Thanks Bill, I am glad you appreciated the poem.

have a nice day

yann

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16 posted 2009-07-12 03:29 AM


thanks Lindsay, enjoyed your words and appreciated your passing.

yann

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