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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2009-07-10 08:25 AM





a childhood rite
to swim with friends
splash and play
dog paddle

miss lily white attitude
says
i don't like
to share my water

skin's too dark
too many of you
don't come back
here's your refund

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2009-07-11 12:07 PM


Most stupendous!

A

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2 posted 2009-07-11 12:29 PM


Growing up is harder for some than other.

This is (excuse the pun)  DEEP.

Tracey

faeriemythc
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3 posted 2009-07-11 01:17 AM


I like this, I've seen this.  Very sad.
TinaTrivett
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4 posted 2009-07-11 02:24 AM


Thanks all

I saw this story and it made me cringe....to think this is 2009 and this sort of thing is still happening.
http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/31833602/ns/us_news-race_and_ethnicity/

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