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Open Poetry #45

A Traceless Life

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-07-09 07:43 PM

               A Traceless Life

The pale-soft glow of the moon’s bright
   imperfect mirror
sweeps through the lovely twilight window
where just beyond … all lost spirits,
dreams, and shadows wander-dance
this undemanding summer eve
in dark, profound silence
with the timeless passing wind.

A traceless life rolls on …
longing for tomorrow.

                          --- b. e. adams (7/9/2009)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-07-09 08:34 PM

Yo Bruce,

This is a fine write. A traceless life is something to be valued.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2009-07-09 08:42 PM

A fine write in deed, Bruce. I have to think about a traceless life.
Ida

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2009-07-09 09:58 PM

I love to "wander-dance"~~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-07-10 05:48 AM

Your melancholy produces wonderful poems, dear Bruce.

Of course you know by now, that I believe that nothing ends, that there is continuation, transformation and traces ... always.

The longing for tomorrow is good in many ways no doubt.

“Every hair on your head is numbered” (Mat 10:30). " .... this implies so much ...

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-07-10 06:34 AM

Lost spirits wander these mountains endlessly.
Where do the contented happy spirits wander?

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