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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-07-08 07:05 PM


Becoming One

I hand crank
the music box
playing "Fur Elise"
and while it plays
I think of
all the love
that lives in me and
the woman that I love.
Even when she's not there
through the music in the air
I hear her,
I see her,
I smell her,
I touch her
and I kiss her.
Its at these times
when me and Suzie
become one.

JamesLee
07July
2009



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-08 07:14 PM


Beautiful, dear James.  "Für Elise" is really so captivating, it does induce feelings of belonging and oneness.

Well done!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2009-07-09 04:46 AM


hello James, all your poem touch me, romance is everywhere.  thanks

yann

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-07-09 11:56 AM


This is lovely! ~ The sound of music **sigh**


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-07-09 12:10 PM


awe, sweet


Lana

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Realms of Light
5 posted 2009-07-09 02:00 PM



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