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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Again a shade Moves at dusk Among The shadows Those others Who do not matter Stilling singing The old melodies As if nothing Had changed Often I listen to her Though now I should know better Yes once upon a time Even I was young Brave and strong And so easily won Ah my friend After all Is said and done How her voice Still carries me In the wind . |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
A whimsical and lyrical piece that I very much enjoyed Jan |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'm unclear about (meaning of?) the 7th. line from the top: "Stilling singing" ? I am especially fond of the ending: "How her voice Still carries me In the wind" well done! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Bruce Stilling as bringing to a pause, into a private/quiet place. A comma would have helped probably. Thanks both for reading John . |
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