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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-07-08 09:51 AM


I didn't sleep
the smoke made me wheeze.
I am dripping wet
and can't find a shirt to wear.
I am out of coffee
and it's too hot for tea.

I think I'll just whine
and talk about "me" all day.

Okay, how about one
perfunctory "how are you?"

That's nice.

-

Alison

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Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-07-08 10:43 AM


As Joey says, "How YOU doin'?"
WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2009-07-08 10:48 AM


I am dripping wet
and can't find a shirt to wear.

I'm never in the right place at the wrong time.

Well,  Hope your day gets better,
Tracey

2islander2
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3 posted 2009-07-08 10:59 AM


So How are you Alison...Thanks for the charming poem.

yann

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4 posted 2009-07-08 12:14 PM


Hope that you got a strong coffee in the meantime ...

How are you doing, sweet Alison?

Which shirt did you finally choose?

I am melting here too ... still went to sit in the sun for a while, a recharging of beneficial sunlight.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2009-07-08 03:10 PM


Believe me, such a cat/moose/robin/and-probably-every-animal-under-the-sun-and-moon lover is allowed to whine as much as she likes!

Giggles.  Really enjoyed this.  Hope things changed soon after that.

Owl

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6 posted 2009-07-08 03:38 PM


Yo dear Alison,

My youngest son developed the whine into at art form when he was about four years old.  He’d scream “WHOA NOOOOO!”  It was beautiful.

Now he's a math professor, I don't think he does it anymore.  We hope not.

Love Bobby  

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-07-08 08:38 PM



~a...

i whined too this morning...but at least i had my coffee!  poor thing...

shel

  

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8 posted 2009-07-08 08:41 PM


Z,
I feel like that sometimes, too. Some days I just want to kick, scream and throw things because nothing is going my way. Hopefully you were able to at least get the coffee. Personally, I can hang around the house without a shirt, but deny me caffiene and....well, the animals even know to run.

Arana Darkwolf

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9 posted 2009-07-08 09:02 PM


A bit of whinning and complaining makes me feel better and they say God lets you live longer.
                                 Ida

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10 posted 2009-07-08 10:56 PM


Nice, indeed. How are you?






Earth Angel
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11 posted 2009-07-09 11:51 AM


Oh, yes, the perfuntory "How are you?" ~

Well, m'dear, this "How are you?" is genuine! lol "How are you?" ~ I know! I know! ~ Charming as ever!

btw Tea for me, is good in ALL kinds of weather! lol

Loveya!
Linda Lou xo

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12 posted 2009-07-09 12:11 PM


had a little hissy fit myself, well that was because my dog ate my breakfast lol


Lana

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13 posted 2009-07-09 12:13 PM


ms ali-san..wet and topless? oh geeze tell me that is not your idea of a bad day?
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14 posted 2009-07-10 09:56 PM


oh, and whining is simply the precursor to gratitude...make my tea English Breakfast Tea...please
Oklahoma Rose
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15 posted 2009-07-10 10:13 PM


You know, I can deal with no sleep and, even smoke, but NEVER let me run out of coffee. No wonder you were whinning. I would be the world worst grouch, if I had no coffee. I hope your day got better, my friend.
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