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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were the wanting weavers perhaps with slender words all slick ended pressing them in between the ends of locked don't really wanna agains there were empty chairs around like a forest of no one specials and we just meandered through occasions sitting where we wanted for moments then looking around at each other as if we were looking for them but only nonchalantly when they noticed and then there was the laughing we didn't do it with sounds out loud but with our hands over our mouths secretely saying we weren't happy but not wanting the butterflies to end lest we knew our nets would remain broken _____________ daark (highway series) |
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Clang Member
since 2005-12-15
Posts 222 |
Beautifully written. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"we didn't do it with sounds out loud but with our hands over our mouths secretely saying we weren't happy" loved that part... probably more for my own reasons,than yours...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
clang, thanks for the read and comment ______________ suesea, for your own reasons are always worthy and welcome, thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
So, if I were to ride that highway - would I learn how to use words as well as you? Or would I be lost in the sensuality of the road? Because - well just because. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...they (words) just blow out of the holes in my mind when I ride..I wouldn't know how to use them...soooooooooo if you rode along I suspect we'd both get nabbed for littering. thanks little one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: How lovely! Butterflies are the companions of new beginnings and new horizons. Out of the butterfly high you gifted us with another of your "creative highs". Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sigh~...absolutely beautiful... browneyes |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
so many well-painted pictures in this one...very nicely done...time to sigh... |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
A beautiful poem. I especially liked the consonance in this line: "we were the wanting weavers perhaps" Arana Darkwolf |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
but not wanting the butterflies to end lest we knew our nets would remain broken ~just swoon me would you Loverly. H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks my sweet lady friend.. ______________ ms browneyes, thank you lady for the touch ______________ steavenr, humble thanks amigo ________________ ms rachael, thank you so much for the eyes ms ________________ ms ubp..ok..(sprinkling swoon dust over your gown and twitching the magic wand...) thanks babe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks james |
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