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Ericc
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0 posted 2009-07-05 02:00 PM



From my
Wilderness -
Your Eden borders


© Copyright 2009 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-07-05 06:22 PM


It's a beautiful view from either side of the borders and love will dissolve the sense of separation. Wilderness and Eden ... One.

A new scent is born, wildflowers and apple blossoms ..... ohhh!

I love this ...
and you.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-07-06 06:28 AM


Came in to enjoy another read.


2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2009-07-06 10:45 AM


lovely words and images.
I adore short poems.

yann

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-07-06 12:30 PM


Ericc - very nice, you out did yourself this time. Like it a lot...

BC

bel1e
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5 posted 2009-07-06 12:31 PM


~my oh my~

     

OwlSA
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6 posted 2009-07-07 01:33 PM


There is a part of my (and a whole lot of other people's!) country (South Africa), known as The Wilderness - it is an exquisite stretch of coastline and wild country.  As Margherita said, Wilderness and Eden are one.  This is a powerful image.

Owl

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2009-07-07 04:54 PM


And may her flowers cross the border, turning both of your homes into one grand and glorious Eden!

btw I loved Margherita's response!


Linda

Ericc
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8 posted 2009-07-08 12:46 PM


Thank you everyone for the kind words!

Love,
Eric

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