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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-07-03 03:47 PM

There, where queen
annes lace grew
by the graveside

I knew it was time
then, to climb over
the fences.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2009-07-03 04:32 PM

poignant and powerful

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-07-03 04:45 PM

I have read it more than once already and I love it. (is it my bad memory or did you actually change "my" into "the" fences?). Either way it is a powerful poem of change.
And the choice of queen anne's lace is not casual I think ... they are beautiful, but belong to another era ...

Wonderful, jump now into a new ocean of awareness, dear Michele.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-07-03 07:28 PM

Goddess, sunflowers would have put an entirely different connotation on this poignant little beauty.

Linda

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2009-07-03 08:25 PM

Marvelous use of word and image! Loved this!

misce'

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

5 posted 2009-07-03 08:37 PM

So much said inside
the line, at times we must
take that leap,

very well written,

Bloodline

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

6 posted 2009-07-05 10:33 PM

Short and imaginative. Beautifully crafted.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

7 posted 2009-07-05 11:23 PM

~love this

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-07-05 11:28 PM

inkedgoddess - powerful writing with few words. This poem leaves many thoughts to think about...

BC

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2009-07-06 12:54 PM

Wonderfully sensitive poem, good goddess~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2009-07-06 02:19 AM

Short but powerful.
Ida

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2009-07-14 10:13 PM

to climb over fences into a different time perhaps.

Short, yet alot said Mish.

Enjoyed! as always.

m

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