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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2009-06-26 09:36 PM





sifting awareness

languid pace of tiger's stalk

soul's strained acceptance

©2009 by icebox
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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-06-26 09:38 PM


Very good, sir~
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2009-06-27 11:40 AM


Incredibly intense!

There are things we can't avoid, so in surrendering there will be peace.

Love,
Margherita

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
3 posted 2009-06-28 09:52 AM


ah the soul moves at a pace that it will.

Nice Haiku

Yoin

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-06-28 07:05 PM



hello, icebox...

i love haiku poetry and now i love your haiku poetry!

being caught in the amber of this moment makes my heart catch in my throat...

all of that in so little words...nice job!

: )


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