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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-06-26 04:31 PM


Through the blue sky,
entering the grey clouds,
Dropping day, drowsily,
finaly, fell to earth.
Birdsong bade it farewell,
until the light begins
their joyful morning call.
Now wind quickened to
scatter scents soporifically sweetly,
sending sleeping people to
dreaming meadows purpurescent
shadowed in the moonlight.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-06-26 05:02 PM


Oh, this is so soothing!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-06-26 05:06 PM


This is the place I long to be,
peaceful, no worries , just enjoying
the end of the day....with an evening picnic.

~Lovely thoughts

~ARH

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-06-26 05:17 PM


Love your use of alliteration!

A sweetly sung song of 'soporificity'!

Lovely write, Phil!


Linda

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4 posted 2009-06-26 05:20 PM


VERY pleasant 'write' !

[a joy to read] ...

I am especially fond of those

"dreaming meadows ...
  shadowed in the moonlight."

sustained applause for this 'penning' !

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2009-06-26 09:18 PM


A thing of beauty, this~
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2009-06-26 09:20 PM


Hello Phil.. so good to read you again.. very beautiful gifting from you .. a joy to read.

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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