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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Lonely Poet Writing poetry by open window while children are asleep, I try to write down the reason when it rains I always weep. Scratching out on paper, emotion with a word, I hope you will understand and not find me absurd. For you have felt such pain before and can recognize the sign, of a poet having trouble finishing his next line. And if you read my poetry by open window when children sleep, you will think of me, the poet, and the lonely tears I weep. Yoin |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl drift of eye and glass here Tman'..enjoyed your soul showing |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I enjoyed the simple phrasing and emotion in this, and, yes I know the feeling. Nice, Tracey. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks D.S. A older one of mine, Glad you liked it Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you Tracey, Yeah I am pretty much a Free verse guy, so when i do write with the rhyme and meter it tends to be on the simple side. Yoin [This message has been edited by Yoinn (06-27-2009 12:22 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is just so tender, I love it. It shows that poets have busy lives too and try to listen to the muse ... while children sleep. And that's also the time during which they may surrender to emotions. Beautiful! Love, Margherita ps nice to see your smile! |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~hey there, yo... aren't we all lonely poets? : ) "emotion with a word," i really like this line. : ) |
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Dreamer05 Junior Member
since 2009-06-23
Posts 30Kansas |
Do you really cry when it rains? You know I've heard said that when it rains, its really God crying because he is sad about something. Do you think thats true? ~Dreamer05~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yoin it is a little on the sad side but I liked the way you wrote it, keep up the good work. Lindsay |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks Margherita Yep finding time to reflect and write always can be hard when life wants to pull you in so many different directions.I hope I don't scare people away from my poetery with that mug shot of me. lol Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Hey there brn... glad you like this simple little poem Lonely? me ? never. I tell you I am so popular that <-----(notice's its raining outside).. oh i have to go (sniff) "now where is that pen. (sniff) yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Hey dreamer, Thank you for reading my poem. Do I really cry when it rains?. Sometimes after I wax my car then it rains..the neighbors can hear me crying me head off all the way down the street. Hmmm not sure if rain is when gods sad...but im pretty sure hes happy when I see a rainbow.  Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you Lindsay, I always appreciate your replies. Yoin |
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