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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-06-25 02:13 PM


sometimes those afternoon faces pressed to glass
like your eyes did the smoke of a smoldering habana
when it was the only thing we had in uncommon
other then the way your roses made us shadow shaped friends

there is a bucket of sun sky over there on the purple now
horizons always make lovely shelves they say
how they seem to hover just below someone's heaven
even the godless ones seem to gaze awestruck

you are more comfortable now in your skin it seems
leaving buttons open as if my shopping was ok
and you didn't mind an occasional mind drive
to test you around the curves again every so often

you still toy with my tattoos as if they were licked on
and I imagine you would move them in different places too
a woman thing to rearrange her surroundings perhaps
or maybe you think more of my day would be visible

if all of the dark man's history wasn't so easy to see


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-06-25 05:01 PM


quote:
there is a bucket of sun sky over there on the purple now
horizons always make lovely shelves they say
how they seem to hover just below someone's heaven
even the godless ones seem to gaze awestruck



Thank you for taking us on your highways. Your visions make for awe-inspiring horizons, always.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2009-06-25 05:50 PM


Loved it


ARCTIC WIND

kindredspirit
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3 posted 2009-06-25 07:02 PM


Your words pull me in and hold me close.
brneyedgrly
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nowhere and everywhere
4 posted 2009-06-25 07:34 PM





there is a bucket of sun sky over there on the purple now
horizons always make lovely shelves they say
how they seem to hover just below someone's heaven
even the godless ones seem to gaze awestruck

you are more comfortable now in your skin it seems
leaving buttons open as if my shopping was ok
and you didn't mind an occasional mind drive
to test you around the curves again every so often
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~breath~taking.....

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2009-06-25 07:45 PM


your sunshine buckets drench
both mind and body

tantric pleasures

your highway views delight the senses

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2009-06-25 11:04 PM


Loving this series, and that bucket of sun really does it for me and my tan lines!!  

You're such a cool Daddy~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2009-06-26 07:19 AM


aw you guys....I'd blush if I could remember how...thanks to each of you for the comments...
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8 posted 2009-06-28 10:44 PM


I'd rearrange your tattoos, but I wouldn't dust them.  I'd turn them into paperdolls and add them to my collection.

A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2009-06-29 07:38 AM


ms ali-san..your collection..now would that not be called group sex then?  thanks babe
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