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howardtsu
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0 posted 2009-06-09 01:29 PM



detective #1 :

                               he wasn't lying to his sleuth

                               he was crying to his sleuth

detective #2 :

                               so what's the tie-in to his sleuth

detective #1 :

                               i'm not denying it's the truth

                               that he was flying with his sleuth

                               i'm just supplying it's the truth

                               she was denying to his tooth

                               that she was sweet

detective #2 :

                               that must have been some feat

                               look at this

                                        [showing her the picture]

detective #1 :

                               no wonder he was trying so hard

                               her personality was covered with Butterfingers and Whatchamacallits ..... ?

detective #2 :

                               that too

                               and Baby Ruths

                               and other qualites guys consider neat

detective #1 :

                               you want to file this under incomplete?

detective #2 :

                                                      might as well





                                                                                                                      love,

                                                                                                                      eve & howard

                                                                                                                      

                              


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Bloodline
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since 2009-05-23
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Oklahoma
1 posted 2009-06-09 08:10 PM


Clever and with a wit
to point, enjoyed,

Bloodline

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-06-10 01:13 AM


"Baby Ruths

                               and other qualites guys consider neat"

...still smiling...

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2009-06-10 06:38 AM


I loved this so much I took to the archives!

I can't believe what I've been missing!


Cleverly done. I can't wait for the next installment.

Hatmadda
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since 2009-06-11
Posts 10
Colorado
4 posted 2009-06-12 03:03 AM


Baby Ruth and Wathamacallits?
That's the most suspicious thing I've ever heard. Sleuth 2 is hiding something for sure.

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678

5 posted 2009-06-25 12:50 PM


thanks guys  
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