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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-12-12 09:18 PM


What Bone’s eyes have seen,
and Bone’s body has felt,
you wouldn’t particularly
want to see or feel.  

Bone’s lives with these memories
and that’s a hard,
and tough thing to do.  

Bone’s surrounds his self with people.  

That helps him
cloud over the memories.  

If Bones didn’t surround himself
with other people,
the memories would bring him
to his knees—
a place where Bones has been
far too often.

Bobby

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SlowlyFallAway
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1 posted 2009-12-12 09:59 PM


Sometimes you learn the most when you're down on the ground. Nice write
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-12-12 10:08 PM


Thanks dear SlowlyFallAway,

I'm afraid what you say is true.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-12-13 05:14 AM


A wise thing for Bones to do.
                         Ida

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-12-13 11:53 AM


Bobby - so true, it's good to be around people for some memories will bring one to their knees...

BC

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-12-13 02:38 PM


hi bobby, this is a very moving poem, one at your best , it opens your heart with grace and dignity...Thanks for the share.

best wishes

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-12-13 08:46 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

As you know, Bones always did have a good head on his shoulders.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-12-13 08:47 PM


Thanks Bill,

It's good to know that you know where Bones is coming from.

Bobby


Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-12-13 08:48 PM


Thanks Yann,

I pleased that the poem worked that way for you.

Bobby

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9 posted 2009-12-15 12:40 PM


Bones is more than entitled to borrow a little peace. *S* And the others probably enjoy his company as much as he needs theirs.... This is great, Bobby!
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10 posted 2009-12-15 05:42 PM


A lot of warriors out there on the battle
field could join Bones...

Good write Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2009-12-15 07:45 PM


Thanks dear Suthern,

For the kind thoughts on Bones.  He enjoys your company too.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-12-15 07:47 PM


Thanks Magnus,

I'm pleased that this poem worked well for you.  I feel that you are correct about those other warriors.

Bobby

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13 posted 2009-12-16 02:22 AM


I am glad that Bones has found peace in friendship and the support of others.  I just want to wrap him in a hug.

Merry Christmas, Bobby, to you and Bones.

Love,
Alison

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2009-12-16 06:23 AM


"Bone’s surrounds his self with people.  

That helps him
cloud over the memories. "

I think many of us do that, Bobby

M

LindsayP
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15 posted 2009-12-16 11:32 PM



Hi Bobby it's great that Bones has so many

friends to help him out, after all thats what friends are for.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2009-12-16 11:57 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

Friends are just like family, and sometimes are the best family a person can have.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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17 posted 2009-12-16 11:59 PM


Thanks dear Nakdthoughts,

I'm glad that you can relate with Bones.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2009-12-17 12:01 PM


Thanks Lindsay,

Bones is lucky to have such close, and good friends.  He tries to always be a good friend to them.

Bobby

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