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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The chocolate bar that we sweetly slip in our mouth, the chocolate bar that we crunch friendly, to make us forget our thoughts or please us, it makes us become aware that we are unfortunate, that we need its help, that we are ready to change, one moment of sweetness is a moment of consciousness, and the chocolate loves us because we are its mystery and it is our remedy, momentary gentle as the love, momentary regrettably as ourselves, the chocolate bar which we swallow, is there some love missing us? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Cher Yann ... ahhh j'aime bien ta passion pour le chocolat!  Well of course we eat it because it tastes so nice on our tongue and because it produces serotonin ... inducing a state of happiness. It might be true that we eat it as a sort of substitute ... but I wouldn't say that all those who are in love or are aware of love in their life don't need or desire chocolate?! You have outdone yourself with this one, dear Yann. I love it and yes of course I do love chocolate too. Do I have some I wonder ... must go and find it! Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Yann, yes I think that chocalate is a favourite right around the world, perhaps more than anything else we could name. Well done my friend. Lindsay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me want a Milky Way good piece here Yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Dear Margherita, when I read your comment I am sure your soul is made of chocolate, (smiles),thanks for the very delicious and warm comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Lindsay you told it right and true, thanks for the enjoyable comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Dixie, you made me want one too, milky way is delicious and I will buy some tomorrow, just to remember, it makes a so long time I haven't eaten one..Thanks for the comment and read yann |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
MMm, what a delicious poem. I love chocolate, it makes me happy especailly when I'm moody. But I eat it for the pleasure of it's taste.  |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
Chocolate cheers me when I'm down...as I'm sure it does for many. I could almost feel its silkenness on my tongue while reading your words. YUM! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I totally agree with you Ken, we like chocolate for its taste, yes but I know persons who seek comfort and warmth in chocolate, my point of view has some acccuracy I think, thanks for the kind comment. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Nancy, it does the same thing with me when I am down, thanks for the warm and accurate comment. regards and cheers yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
At first I thought you were talking about a Chocolate Bar, where you could drink cognac and eat all the chocolate your heart desired, and hopefully not suffer the consequences of too much cognac or too much chocolate...I love the Dove Dark Chocolate bars...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I have been known to drown my sorrows in a chocolate bar or two. I so understand this one, yann. Thank you for sharing pieces of yourself with us throuh your poetry. Merry Christmas. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks James, I didn't know about chocolate bars, you made me discover something very interesting, thanks for the read and comment. regards yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Dear Alison, I totally understand what you write and the syndrome of chocolate you talked about. merry Christmas. yann |
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