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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2009-11-23 11:39 AM



A Little Different

She's from a different world
But, not where she seems to be
She's from, another place
That, she doesn't even, see.

She thinks, she's stuck, somewhere
And I don't have any doubt
That she will end up, someplace
That she knows, nothing, about.

But, when she gets there
She'll open her eyes, wide
And wonder why, she never saw them
All those things, she is inside.

They were always, there
A part, of who she was
But, she always thought,
"What is, is what, one does".

But, she'll learn the difference
That, there's more than, what seems
One of these days, coming soon
She's going to realize, her dreams.

Some, she didn't know, she had
And some of them, brand-new
Some, she never thought would be
When the "never/ever" come, true.

I just wish, the best for her
Hope, she'll have a life so good
Because, that's what "nice people"
Can have, if they, would.

I think, she's going to grab it
As soon, as she can
Instead of being, one of those
Who, was an "also ran".

So here's to that "different Lady"
That I had a chance, to meet
And, to tell her that, "I love her"
And think she's really, sweet.

9-23-02


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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20toes
Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA
1 posted 2009-11-23 01:50 PM


This piece of work is simply beautiful yet nothing simple about it...you have a natural gift with your words...i really enjoy this piece

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2009-11-23 02:09 PM


Enjoyed this one also.
latearrival

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