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Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA

0 posted 2009-06-22 09:45 PM



Reaching

She
Reaches
To the stars
Way up above
For the brightest one
In hopes of great success
Pushing aside such defeat
Hoping to gain all her desires
Only to reach the greatest of success
Just so she will able to make him smile

06-17-2009



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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2009-06-23 03:03 AM


I just might have to try that poetry workshop.
                            Ida

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-06-23 07:50 AM


a gift of a smile  ~~ is always special


M

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
3 posted 2009-06-23 10:38 AM


~keep reachin', dear rose~

: )

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-06-23 01:37 PM


Sue, I love your poetic "reach" with this one! I enjoy reading the fruits of your labour in the Poetry Workshop!

Love 'n a hug,
Linda



Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2009-06-23 04:24 PM


The precious idea of making him smile is so beautifully rendered, dear Sue. Well done.

Love,
Margherita

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
6 posted 2009-06-23 10:32 PM


Rose, you are improving so greatly! I'm proud of you
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2009-06-23 10:36 PM


Oklahoma Rose - smooth as silk you have written this. Liked it a lot, especially the form...

BC

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2009-06-23 10:38 PM


This rose is smelling sweet~ great job!

~ARH

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