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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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0 posted 2009-06-22 11:03 AM



My Dad's Pipe

Blue smoke from a pipe
that was my dads,
twirls around my head
the same way I watched it as a boy,
drift around his.
Smoking here in my old chair,
I remember everything
I’ve learned from him,
not in words but by his example.

When life becomes too much
for a simple man like me,
and threatens to push me down,
I light up his old pipe.
It reminds me to be strong
and never give up.
It reminds me that being
a man, a father, means
there are people counting on me.

I won’t forget dad.

Yoin


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2009-06-22 11:09 AM


a special gift indeed


Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
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2 posted 2009-06-22 11:13 AM


Great sentiment Yoinn.

Although my dad didn't smoke, I feel the same way and can relate to this.

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan
3 posted 2009-06-22 12:40 PM


Thank you both for your kind words.

Yoin

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