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Balladeer
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0 posted 2009-11-09 11:50 AM


I stood there, almost mesmerized,to watch his fingers fly,
His hands creating miracles right there before my eye.
A touch of red, a swipe of blue, some yellow, white and green
The chalk created works of art like I had never seen.

DaVinci in a tye-dye shirt held court for all to see,
The sidewalk of a busy street his only tapestry.
Oblivious to those who watched, the sidewalk artist drew
As castles, kings and gardens sprung like magic into view.

At last, the final line was drawn. The artist stood and bowed
Receiving praise and dollar bills from his admiring crowd.
I stood, applauding with the rest, at such a grand display
Then grabbed the sidewalk artist's arm before he walked away.

"Your work is great", I smiled at him, "A wonderful display"
"But look! Storm clouds are moving in. The sky is turning gray."
"Before too long a driving rain will turn your work to ruin!"
"Don't matter none", the young boy said. "The joy is in the doin'".

..and, sure enough, the hard rains came and wiped the sidewalks clean.
The beauty of the artist's work was nowhere to be seen.
That night, beneath the covers, many thoughts ran through my head.
I thought about my life and what the sidewalk artist said.

My life had been a sidewalk mural, silhouettes in chalk,
From all the things that I had done and paths that I had walked.
Decision making, right and wrong, came slowly into view
And all the things I hadn’t done that I had hoped to do.

Relationships both came and went, some happiness, some pain.
Some sections had been washed away by tears instead of rain.
I thought of friends and family that left this world behind
And how their passing left unanswered questions in my mind.

Was there a point?, I asked myself, some everlasting worth
To justify what I had done while visiting this Earth?
The end result turns out the same, no matter what we’ve done.
Regardless of our actions, we are here and then we’re gone.

Achievements that we may have made will one day fade from view
And everyone that we had known will follow that end, too.
So what’s the point of happiness as something we can’t save
But leave behind when it’s our call to slip into the grave?

I searched for answers, lying there, to find a point of view
Recalled the artist’s smile and how his agile fingers flew
Creating masterpieces that were destined to be ruin
And I found my answer in his words – the joy is in the doin’.


© Copyright 2009 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-11-09 12:02 PM


Oh, Mike... this is one I'll be coming back to... the master and his pen certainly haven't lost their touch. *S*

It's good to see you posting and I'm hoping you'll post again soon... say... Wednesday? *S* And you know the poem I'm hoping to see... even though I know I'll never read it without crying. *S*

Beautiful work, sir... with thanks for all your "doin"s. *S*

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2 posted 2009-11-09 12:27 PM


Thanks, suthern gal. Nice to be back and, OF COURSE, Wednesday is it's day
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3 posted 2009-11-09 01:12 PM


I really enjoyed this and it speaks of truth. But you will be leaving so much of yourself behind for a lot of people you may never even know. It is in writing in places you may never have heard of. So you and your name and your words will be forewver remembred and not washed away. To that I say how wonderful it is that your art is putting it down on paper.  latearrival  
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4 posted 2009-11-09 01:59 PM


Dear Mike,

I don't know what you will be posting Wednesday or why.  But you can bet your patootie that I will be watching.

I do love this poem - I am part of what you will leave behind.  You opened the door to a language I could read but not write.  You helped me decode a puzzle that I am still learning to understand.

Speaking of which, when you are better - I have two poems for you to look at in the PW.  One is a correction under Write for me Quaternally - post # 49 and the other is under the Duo lesson.

I have missed you lots.

A

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5 posted 2009-11-09 10:56 PM


A stunning piece of work, Balladeer, much to think about.
                                    Ida

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6 posted 2009-11-10 05:51 PM


Wow, this is so profound and so perfectly written. An incredible reading experience, dear Balladeer.

Bravo!... Bravissimo!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2009-11-10 08:22 PM


Thank you Mike. This is exactly what I needed to read tonight.

The joy really is...in the doin.
You were born to be happy, and make others happy in the process.

A wonderful addition to my growing Pips library.

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8 posted 2009-11-10 08:35 PM



Michael, what can I say to do justice to this masterpiece. I have been reading and writing poetry for forty odd years and have

never read a poem more perfect than this wonderful poem. It is the best poem that I

have read of yours and I congratulate you for writig it. It was an absolute delight

to read. Keep them coming my friend and take care.

Lindsay

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9 posted 2009-11-10 09:42 PM


latearrival, you nailed it well. That's a reason why we all write, isn't it? Thank you for the kind words.

Dear Alison...anything I have done to help you gives special meaning to my life. Thank you for being there..

marchmadness....much indeed and I thank you for your  heartfelt response.

Margherita...always a pleasure to see you, my friend. Thank you..

Midnite Sun...your library is a place I feel honored to be in. Thank you for your wonderful support..

LindsayP...thank you for such high praise. Coming from someone I admire so much for their own poetic expertise makes it even more special. I appreciate you, sir.

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10 posted 2009-11-11 12:45 PM


Nice read and what a read. I found a great charicature artest who did the illustrations in my new childrens book called:
           "Little Joe the Wrangjer"
You can see it at:
           www.booksbyinmon.com

AL

AL Inmon

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11 posted 2009-11-11 02:29 AM


Michael you are an artist of another kind and you are so right - it is in the doin.  I thought you may enjoy this from one of my bookmarked sites Sidewalk Art From Impact Lab

And...I am crying already, as I have read "that one" so many times I know a lot by heart, that and the Widow's Walk, The Letters, and ... Well, you get the idea  

That was one of your best mind-searching ones - made me think once again about similar questions I ask all the time, and already knew the answer.   Get better!  

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12 posted 2009-11-11 06:51 AM


as always, a perfect read and as I age (hopefully gracefully) I find myself asking some of the same questions...

M

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13 posted 2009-11-11 12:52 PM


Ohhhhhhh, Michael, Michael, Michael!!!  I wish you could see how much I'm smiling over here.

I took a moment to come and read, and here you are, in all your rhyming and cadence kissed perfection. What an absolute treat!

The artistry of your words and stories never fail to leave me in awe. You are one incredibly talented and creative man. I loved the story and moral in this. Well done my friend.

I guess there's no surprise how much I'm smiling here ... this was simply wonderful.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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14 posted 2009-11-13 06:38 PM


This is a great way to look at life. The beginning reminds me of mary poppins My favorite line is the one comparing the raindrops to rain. It is so truthful that things wiped out of our lives involve tears and it is a great analogy.
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