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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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the sun's dappling masks the pulseless veins her fingers stroke the fiery corpses mocking wormservants and tricking lovers into believers of beautiful death the crisp of bones fragment beneath secret feet and lift their dusthymns in the truthlight of autumn's moon that will not hide beneath the patchwork of her dress this patient haunting where their skeletons moan lower in some places if you would dig me deep enough you will find the moss damp where I will only sleep until full lipped winds quicken me to twine once more around your limbs to rise your vernal Lazarus H |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my!! This is haunting in such a beautiful way. I love that first verse of yours and every emotion and metaphor in between. Your ending is absolutely fabulous. I am always in for something special when I read you and you don't ever disappoint fair lady!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Spellbinding indeed, dear Heather! To read more than once to catch all the special hues that you wove in. Love, Margherita |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Miss Blues, you are too kind, but you do know how to make a girl smile : ) Thank you so very much. Thank you, lovely Margherita. It's always a pleasure when you drop by. L, H |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You give me shivers... which means even my cells are impressed! *S* Great writing! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP...you take your tree to a new eden ms..!! |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Sweet Suthern~ That is a compliment for sure! Thank you so very much, dear one. D~ I am always searching for new eden places. Appreciate you, mister. L, H |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Heather, I was delighted to see a post from you! It's been too long a while for my liking! What a spellbinding poem you have gifted your fans and friends with! A multi-layered Halloweeny poem of love! Expertly crafted ~ and eerie!  Loved it!So good to see you back in the pip family fold. You've been MISSED!!! Love and a big, warm, welcome-back hug, Linda    |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Aw Linda, I have missed those warm, feathery hugs!!! Thank you angel girl. L, H |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
amazing as always miss your words of wonder, truly |
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EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
stellar in the void of great poetry lately this lands deep in the solar plexus waking up the dead just beautiful I feel your soul |
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