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Nightly, we stumble
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Nightly, we stumble |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The shell, ungutted, locks safe the dark of murmurs but nightly we voyage boldly, in colors cashed out though the dream abbreviates the waves express and deflect the moondriven sea onset winds tell a story usurping a harvest of nautical miles, a crescendo brims of both sin and sanctuary once ( for when we were roaming the deep) twice for the charred remains thrice, a trinity rings now at the strike of begin at the segue of sands minus harbors in lieu of a shout on skyway the constellations, already cluttered so nightly we stumble at the digression of birds on the recycle of "we" [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-21-2009 05:58 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh aren't you something else!! Like "a perfect storm" this came at me from all directions. Love your choice of words and the feeling of just wanting to go with it! Wonderful, you!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! This is a definite keeper for this reader. There isn't much that compares to a great sea-scape write. Thanks, Mish! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You "stumble" but the reader soars within your visions. Wonderful imagery!! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."in lieu of a shout on skyway the constellations, already cluttered"... Pure grace, the way your mind works. I love following along the pictures you paint, and this spoke ecstacy to me... the sky so full, made room for one more shooting star! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done - has to go back up the ladder, for more people to enjoy. Loved it! |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Good write. Thanks Rick A. Delmonico |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You lay me out every time lady. Your rich language is peerless. H [This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (06-24-2009 11:52 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - another great write, as you do... BC |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
You need this to be seen! ~ A lovely piece of work should be seen once again   ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks very much for stopping by |
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