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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2009-10-11 04:09 AM



Near my bed
an abondant heap
of neglected stuff.

Every night
I commit
chocolate sin.

My thoughts
can't forget you.

© Copyright 2009 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-10-11 10:00 AM


The title did not serve as to what one
might expect to find inside.

Delightful surprise!


hafrock
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2 posted 2009-10-11 10:20 AM


A crime unexpected..cool writing
brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-10-11 12:24 PM



yann

I read that eating chocolate right before bed isn't good..you don't sleep as well

sorry to give you bad news

   shellie

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-10-13 01:29 PM


thanks sunshine for passing and commenting.

yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2009-10-13 01:29 PM


yes indeed afrock, it is better this way.

yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2009-10-13 01:30 PM


thanks shellie, I know that but what can I do ? chocolate is important sometimes.

regards

yann

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