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The Flora and the Fauna (Pantoum)
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The Flora and the Fauna (Pantoum) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The Flora and the Fauna (Pantoum) I marveled at the blending of the flora and the fauna, the fresh green scent of laurel wood and passion of Nirvana still lingering where I stood. The fresh green scent of laurel wood drifting from the bays still lingering where I stood brought a moment of deep haze. Drifting from the bays, the breath of hope that followed bought a moment of deep haze into my hollows that were hallowed. The breath of hope that followed after God Almighty called into my hollows that were hallowed took my heart, my soul, my all. After God Almighty called and passion of Nirvana took my heart, my soul, my all, I marveled at the blending of the flora and the fauna. God bless, Lighthouse Bob |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This poem is really permeated with your soul's emotion in being aware of God's gift, dear Bob. It's nice to see all these different forms of poetry. You are able to meet any challenge with your poetic skills! God bless. Love, Margherita |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! I printed this one Bob, it is simply gorgeous! I marvel every day at my surroundings, so will frame this and put it by my door. Beautiful! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Margherita and Mysteria, You gals are the best! You are both such a wonderful inspiration and encouragement to me and to my writing poetry. Thank you. Thank you, Margherita, for your confidence in me that you think that I have the 'poetic skills' to meet any challenge, WoW and, again, Thank you and, OMG, Thank you so much, Mysteria, for even offering to take my poem and frame it and place it on your door which happens to open up to the most wonderful surroundings ever! OMG! You two, You Two, Your friendship and Your inspiration and Your encouragement are beyond words, beyond description. Thank you! Thank you! God bless, -Bob |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bob, I am enjoying your poetry so much. I have begun to follow you from section of PiP to other sections. I love your faith and belief and I really am enjoying the styles of poetry that you are sharing with us. Alison |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So this is heaven on earth!!! Beautiful work, all of it! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very lovely!!! Your words let me slip right out of this cubicle and into sheer beauty... thank you! *S* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was delightful Bob ... smooth, flowing and simply inspiring. Very beautiful indeed. I needed this today, and I thank you for such a wonderful read.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Alison, BluesSerenade by the seaside, *S* (capitalized) and, of course, who could forget, Kit, WoW!!! Thank you, thank you so very, very much to each of you for your kind responses and I do sooooooo want you each to know that you have touched my heart in that I now know my poem has touched each of yours in a very unique and special way. Thank you. Thank you, thank you, I do thank you and do appreciate each of you and, as always, God bless, -Bob |
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dragngrl28 Junior Member
since 2009-10-12
Posts 45Texas, USA |
This is a very well thought out and written poem. You used the repeat lines very well and the entire poem flowed well. I very much enjoyed reading your poem. I strugglee with formal poetry writing so I am a bit envious |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
dragngrl28, Oh, please, don't be. I suppose it's just about like anything else and just takes a bit of time and practice to learn. That's all and, so you know, your name or, something like your name, anyway, the name ‘dragon girl’ inspired me to research about dragons and inspired me to write a poem. I hope you like it. It's called 'Jabberboxy.' Thanks so much for your kind comment and God bless, -Bob |
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