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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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0 posted 2009-09-28 08:03 PM



It's Friday in September
and the rain came again-
it brought me a poem
like a long lost friend.

And just as I was sitting here
it became Monday in October-
the rain turned to snow
and I gave up being sober.

The garden is gone now.
The creek is much colder.
Just in the past year,
I've grown 50 years older.
I know I can't go on much longer,
for looking over my shoulder.

Sometimes I wonder why he came
to take me off the battered road,
when I was struggling to walk
with the wind when it blowed....

I'm lost now here within October,
40 years old and minus the shoulder.
dont know what is worst-
jail or death
which will come first?


© Copyright 2009 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-09-29 05:19 AM


Dear Dixie, I see you are in a very dark moment of melancholy. Your poem renders this mood strongly.
You have achieved so many things these past months. You have published books, you have worked in your garden, you have brought joy to others. You have your youth and the maturity to reorganize your life, if it does not suit you. But right now, absorb the wonderful autumn colors and inhale the fresh air and ... dance.
It might be a sad dance in certain moments, but it will activate the spirit of life and the gratitude of BEING.
May you be able to make the best of your freedom.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2009-09-29 07:05 AM


Dixie-girl.. our dear Marhgerita writes with so much wisdom and love in her words.. as do you... your words although may yearn for freedom and happiness also bring strength and wisdom to you, you just have to open your heart to read them...

sending you special hugs from Paris
Bisous
RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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