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Open Poetry #45

Time Goes On

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-09-27 01:14 PM

Time Goes On
Life goes on
Yet
Time goes on
With life
With love
Life with time
Time after time
Yet
Time doesn't stand still
Time doesn't seems going fast
I am still having memories of you
On my mind
I don't know why?
I think
It is just a past
Time can tell you
Time goes on
Time shows the love on the face
Yet time can't tell us
Whether
Time stays untill the dawn
And the sunrise
On the ocean
Yet
Time goes on and on
Time shows till the sunrise
Time goes on
filled the memories

larzana
Member

since 2009-09-17

Posts 55

1 posted 2009-09-27 01:41 PM

Time...such an elusive concept...wonderful write.

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

2 posted 2009-09-27 03:38 PM

vandana - The intermingling of Life and Time and the fascinating elusiveness of each, poetically rendered to capture the reader. Amazing how our memory holds on to both even though each passes into the other so quickly. Very nicely done. Namyh

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-09-28 12:24 PM

In Divine time, we will know all the reasons why.

Linda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-09-28 07:13 PM

Nice...James

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