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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2009-09-19 11:38 PM



I guess one day it happened-
I’m not sure when, or why…
I only know I’m different,
That I no longer cry.

I simply ceased my dreaming,
My poetic pen ran dry…
A natural progression…
When a person’s dreams all die.

I don’t miss the sorrow.
I’m rather glad it’s gone.
Romantic aspirations-
Frustrate one who’s alone.

The simple acts of living,
Surviving day to day…
Have become my sole ambitions
Since the visions went away.

It’s simpler now, I must admit;
Yet more than once I’ve sighed…
I sort of miss the dreamer-
Who with his visions died.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2009-09-19 11:48 PM


That dreamer is still there, John, and the pen is as skilled as ever.
                                 Ida

Alison
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Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
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2 posted 2009-09-19 11:55 PM


I follow your poetry as if I am president of your Poetry Groupie Following (PGF).  Betcha didn't even know you had one, did you.  Well, you do as of now.

Thank you for all the poetry and sharing your imagination, memories - and you.

Alison

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
3 posted 2009-09-20 06:05 AM


An excellent read. Thanks.
Melton

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