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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2009-09-18 03:55 PM




A young man sits at the bar
He chats amicably with the owner
I see him casually look my way
Eager perhaps to change the mood
His smile is engaging and warm
He says a softly spoken ‘Bonjour’
I nod and smile in return
His look is stylish but understated
His eyes are the blackest brown
There is no malice in his face
He returns to his conversation
And I sit and enjoy the view
He has offered...


Bisous de Paris
RDB


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (09-20-2009 01:15 PM).]

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-09-18 04:25 PM


Sounds like you're having a great time in Paris, Ronniece.

                               Ida

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-09-18 04:48 PM


No wonder you love Paris, la charmante, it offers such charming gifts with a simple gaze.

It's leisure time and you make it sound sooooo good!

Love,
Margherita

1slick_lady
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3 posted 2009-09-18 05:19 PM


nothing like a GREAT view !!!
keep em coming i love this

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-09-18 05:28 PM


Paris is good to you...James
brneyedgrly
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5 posted 2009-09-18 06:41 PM



lovely  


Rick
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6 posted 2009-09-19 05:53 AM


A lovely shared moment once again Roniece, I'm glad you are enjoying the view lol. Keep enjoying your time and sharing your thoughts.

Rick

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2009-09-19 09:13 AM


~ and I enjoy the views de Paris that you offer your readers!

I love the view of the City of Sighs as seen through your eyes!

Love 'n a hug,
Lindylou

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8 posted 2009-09-19 11:59 AM


Beautiful soft romantic write my dear Poetess.

Adieu
vic

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2009-09-19 01:03 PM


Romantic Write indeed, dearest RDB poetess.


ARCTIC WIND

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10 posted 2009-09-20 12:12 PM


Okay, you are almost talking me into going over there some day when you are there.  You beautiful flirt you.  I love seeing the view that you offer us.  You bring me smiles.

Love,
A

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