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Welcome To Fail |
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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Work, Friday parties, chores, spouses, kids, Fashion to follow and patterns to be - Standards of living. And now repeat: "This is my life as I want it to be". You think you're perfect, you swear it's true, But nobody is, you are nobody then. You're welcome to Fail - population is you, Enjoy the illusion of freedom, Failmen! Late in the evening you search for some fun, Playing net wars of the stupid and lame. Pressing the button, you load your gun. Play your reality rather than games! You think you're perfect, you swear it's true, But nobody is, you are nobody then. You're welcome to Fail - population is you, Enjoy the illusion of freedom, Failmen! The further it takes you, the further you go. A plain carbon paper with plain decorations Is all your damn life till the end of the show, A pattern that's set for the next generations. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, heavy duty metal...good von, as a co-worker would say... well done...sounds like you were talking to a narcissist? I love readying you, you call it as it is... keep on penning |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Hay you been looking into my house or what  That's a wonderful description. Very well penned...  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I never fail to read one of your poems. You just say what you have to say and you say it really well. A |
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