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Open Poetry #45

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i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

0 posted 2009-09-13 10:15 PM

There was no pain.
No guilt.
Not a trace of the past.

No regrets.
No harsh feelings.

All I ever said was
"Hello.."
and he smiled..

Like a spell broken,
our painful parting in the past
vanished.

Just another bittersweet chapter
of this diary,

....It must've been a dream.
August 18 2007
9:00 pm

"it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-09-14 09:14 AM

There can be so much in a simple "hello"! Very lovely.

Love
M

GBride
Senior Member

since 2009-07-02

Posts 538

2 posted 2009-09-14 06:57 PM

You wrote this poem two years ago and you are just now posting it?
Doesn't it make you mad that you have worked so hard on this poem and few look at it. Let's send it back to the top for more comments. It's only fair.

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

3 posted 2009-09-15 06:44 PM

thanks Gbride...
i was reading thru my diary and i saw this poem..

:-)

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

4 posted 2009-09-15 06:44 PM

margherita: thank you. :-)

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