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martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-06-17 03:23 AM

Popped out for a smoke and the hot summer breeze blew him down to the corner pub
to order a yummy frozen fruity drink to cool a tepid tongue
across the patio two tempting trollops flipped their hair and a wisp of a smile
sitting uninterested, alone with the need for a date for a movie ticket on morrow's eve

He invisioned himself with one of the two torrid temptresses
that were more suited to a sleezy sticky theater
He thought, been there done that
that type of girl does not suit, nor satisfy

the melancholy clouds have cleared
the mind of this middle aged man
as the sunshine skies scorch

acceptance of circumstance
and the matter of facts
as they be
as they may

a wanderer
out of place
who shall wander
far from here

as merrily as a man might manage...

Sonofgloin
Junior Member

since 2009-06-09

Posts 48
Australia

1 posted 2009-06-19 01:40 AM

Way to go Texas, yes I was there, great descriptive and word smithing. I will look for some of your other stuff, but I really enjoyed this first read one...Paul

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-06-19 06:56 AM

quote:
a wanderer
out of place
who shall wander
far from here

as merrily as a man might manage...

Nice slice of the reality of this aging man. "Melancholy has cleared his mind ...". A melancholic insight!
There are too many that make fools of themselves ..... i.e. our Berlusconi!

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-06-19 10:07 AM

It's always a treat to read you.
Your poetry is unique and so full of feeling.

Great poem!!

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-06-19 10:55 AM

It's true, they don't don't satisfy.

He's a smart dude.

-P

Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth,
They were breaking each and every time I tried to speak.

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

5 posted 2009-07-15 02:22 AM

thanks for the support guys

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