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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
Mind is full and brimming Not sure what time is for dreaming And the pulse is always beating Twice as fast as the living There is no beast for the killing Nor evidence so quite compelling To fly you must be willing Two light years past rebelling Nite has no redemption And blindness no ambition Ceasing fire is no exemption In fading, no position But what to fly for colors In the light or undercover There must be one more than the other There must always be the hunger Because when half full or empty Is relative and senseless To the one truth so distinctive There must beat a heart relentless I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me. |
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Davepth New Member
since 2009-03-30
Posts 8Venlo, Netherlands |
Because when half full or empty Is relative and senseless To the one truth so distinctive There must beat a heart relentless Liked this part a lot most of the whole poem (which is, in total, a really good one to!) It gives me a bit of a negative impression, but well it's how u interpretate it  Take Care, Dave |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I really enjoy your lyrical poetry |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
thank you very much. i wrote this during a really rough period a few years ago when life was coming faster than i could live it and not much of it good. but i kept going and somehow made it through cuz i just dont know the meaning of quitting i guess lol. zaac I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me. |
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