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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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She once fought for those words, for their feel, the touch that welcomed each morn. She scaled each line to rise to the top, to clear the clouded thoughts to attend her needs. She envied the real through starving eyes, embracing the memories in a distant mind. She's trapped now, between the lines, navigating the impossible, just a day tripper... searching for more. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
We always search for more ... "a day tripper" can mean that we live in the Now, which is a good idea, as it allows us to not worry too much about the past or the future. Dear Maureen, I enjoyed your poetic reflections. Love, Margherita |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Days build into weak periods of endless time ... its the depth between the lines that will fill a single day in a lifetime! Ct |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Sounds just like me. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
She scaled each line to rise to the top, to clear the clouded thoughts to attend her needs. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My favorite verse. Nice series you've put together here with, He, She and They. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
there are far too many of us , I believe, for which these lines ring all-too-true: "...now, between the lines, navigating the impossible, just a day tripper... searching for more." v. well 'penned' !! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Margherita, thank you always for your interesting comments. I live in the "now" since aging tends to do that to you  Craig, I love your thoughts "its the depth between the lines that will fill a single day in a lifetime!" Oklahoma Rose, guess we are living a parallel life BluesSerenade, Thank you for noticing this small "series" of feelings, Lori.  Bruce,"...now, between the lines, navigating the impossible, just a day tripper... searching for more." Yes, I never realized how empty a life could feel, even when times seem to be a bit better. M |
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Nancy Hardin Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 58Nevada, United States of America |
This speaks to all women. Thanks for your insight. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Nicely done Maureen, You penned it well. love Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - you write your feelings well... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Zeigeist Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 311Michigan |
ah yes...to drive forward while watching the rearview mirror, difficult for sure. I will read more of yours. Z. |
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