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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30
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Oregon

0 posted 2009-08-26 12:49 PM


Change is our adrenaline rush.
Change is manna of the day.
From attitudes to lifestyle change;
From then to present day.

We've gone from smaller lower price
Accommodating what we lacked,
To have them soaring, crashing, roaring
The price of gas and milk now jacked.

Then is something we don't get,
Giving thanks that you're alive.
Now most want and want some more
And pout if business doesn't thrive.

Change is our adrenaline rush
and it is amazing how
We change and shift and grow and live
And move from then to now.

© Copyright 2009 Melissa ReneĆ© Axtell - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2009-09-01 08:43 PM


i feel like this is incomplete

but i like where it is going

and yes, i do feel the change

and
i feel that our lives span a significant time in human history


ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
2 posted 2009-09-02 03:23 AM


Like your style .True depiction of todays world


ESHA SEN GUPTA
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since 2009-09-01
Posts 108
Maharashtra,India
3 posted 2009-09-02 03:26 AM


Like your style .The words were soft and not very harsh even though the topic  chosen was harsh facts of life


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