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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-08-22 09:02 PM


              home

who paints the music
in a memory or a dream
and spins the gentle mist
that dances with the shadows
to the twilight song of sunset...

for they know no master

walk freely in the footsteps
of a wide white moon
piercing the star-swept sky,
and call only this moment
     … ‘home’

           --- b. e. adams (8/22/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2009-08-22 09:19 PM


Magnificent Bruce.  One of your finest.
Marchmadness
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2 posted 2009-08-23 12:34 PM


I agree with Diamond, Bruce, This is just breathtaking. A keeper for sure.
                                Ida

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2009-08-23 04:00 PM


Bard Bruce, "home" has such a pleasnat ring to it ~ and so do your divine mots.

This is a for me, as well.

Love your poetry!


Linda

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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-08-23 08:30 PM


No point highlighting any of the lines, they really are all perfect. Perfect flow, perfect words, perfect read.


ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2009-08-27 12:23 PM


These wonderful words elicit a sigh within my heart, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2009-08-27 12:49 PM


PERFECTION!

~ARH

Alison
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7 posted 2009-08-27 02:34 AM


Bruce, you stopped me and made me quiet.

Alison

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2009-08-28 01:57 PM


One of your finest writes, MHO.
Prasad Nataraj
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9 posted 2009-08-29 10:11 AM


Breathtaking words indeed!!!

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2009-08-29 04:54 PM


Poet...Masterful words from your pin. Captures the reader and never lets go...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2009-08-29 10:43 PM


Such a very peaceful moment you depict.

This is some heavenly poetry, dreampoet~

Heart2Heart
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12 posted 2009-08-30 02:43 AM


What a lovely poem. enchanting words that hit home with me today
Heart2Heart

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-08-30 03:46 AM


Hello Bruce, to my eyes this is your best, a masterpiece, your inspiration is outstanding and let a jewel, a keeper, now if you don't mind I would copy it in my computer....

Thanks for the enlighning poem.

yann.

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2009-08-30 09:15 AM


a most grand 'thank you' to all who posted
a 'comment/reply' on this penning !

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