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Open Poetry #45

It's raining again

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

0 posted 2009-08-22 12:23 PM

It's raining again

sinister storm clouds assemble,
the sky above rumbles with grief,
and my resolve falters.

tears escape from my eyes,
and droplets slide down leaves.
a cold rain drips on my neck.

lightning flashes, blinding me.
almost invisible in the distance,
a shard of blue sky glows hope.

Rileigh

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

1 posted 2009-08-22 12:42 PM

This is beautiful. I love the hope of blue sky at the end. It really shows that through every storm is blue sky and that's an important thing to know.=^-^= The wording is very eloquent and descriptive. I loved it!
~UNTAMEDelegance

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-08-22 01:00 AM

I feel both your sadness and your strength in this one. I liked it.

Yoin

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-08-22 06:15 AM

Hey Rileigh,

I am glad that you feel hope - it's always there for you. You make me smile as you grow in your abilities to express yourself.

Keep it up and I am thinking of you.

Alison

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