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Coloring Outside the Lines
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Coloring Outside the Lines |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Playing with words is how I draw come see come saw a cup of living grace not flaw covers bewildered and stays the gate Tripping on eccentricity's electricity not late or fate taste of vegetarian with a hint of straw to draw the tooth and grin the truth Can you name the holy gist not quiz of sky but behind the eye Listen and wait mark the path keep the turns straight back across the free up so tree and down so road just know Sing past tune hope and bless the silent sky and closed eye rest as stars fall down weep not the cost of what is lost The sky will dry and all will sun again where the shadows live in afternoon come some soon how is now |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Tripping on eccentricity's electricity not late or fate taste of vegetarian with a hint of straw to draw the tooth and grin the truth" Loved this part! This is a fun one to read outloud, Martie. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'll have some of what you are having, Martie Flowers! That's choice nectar you're sipping! Not only are you "Coloring Outside the Lines", you're coloring below the lines, beside the lines, on top of the lines, through the lines and all around the lines! This was cleverly written and fun to read! Like Kacy, I read it out loud as well!   Linda |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Wow |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how is now indeed just flying by your buzzing bees |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You color outside the line with originality and with a great use of color to paint your words. Wonderful and Wow! A |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
You paint the picture sublimely Martie, thanks for this! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Martie, this is such an energizing poem, to enjoy more than once for sure! Wonderfully creative! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Martie, loved the phrasing and twists and turns~~ M |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Beautiful word play |
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