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viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-08-20 06:19 AM



I would consume you,
a naked and hungry flame
upon dry tinder.

Lapping at every piece of you
carefully constructed to make fire,
I will leave only ash.

But you're like a phoenix,
and you will come back for more.
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Bad Habits.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

© Copyright 2009 Paul Weisbrod - All Rights Reserved
Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-08-20 10:58 AM


Oh yes. Praise for the strong women. I like it. There is alot of women welders where I work, and when they flip that mask up and smile with the dirty face. It doesn't get better dude. LOL

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it.  - Yoin

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2009-08-20 10:08 PM


True that. I used to weld in a company here, two girls in the entire place. 500+ dudes. haha.

Thanks for reading. And yes, praise strong women

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Alison
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Member Rara Avis
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2009-08-22 06:08 AM


Oh yeah.  Not only come back for more, but come back demanding more!  When we know what we like, we don't give it up easy.

Dang, Paul, you are writing some great stuff.

Alison

viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
4 posted 2009-08-22 10:20 PM


I pretend sometimes.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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