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Pluto

0 posted 2009-08-18 11:56 PM



Drops of sorrow
Time compounds
Lost tomorrows
Never found


Thoughts echo
Feelings drown
Past won't let go
Tearful sound


Drops do shatter
Spill all around
Silence gathers
Pieces fallen down


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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2009-08-19 01:38 AM


~Very good!

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
2 posted 2009-08-22 01:59 AM


I like this.

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