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Open Poetry #45

Cut You Like A Kuh-Nife.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2009-08-18 11:14 AM

straight edge blade
cut through cardboard
make shapes and sizes
make holes for grommets and things
similar to me

straight edge blade
cut your way through
my invisible outline
remove me
from this particular scene

straight edge blade
cut through the space between
cut the edges from our lips
that they may heal as one.

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Bad Habits.
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

1 posted 2009-08-18 11:25 AM

Good to see ya posting Paul. I enjoyed this one. Yes if a simple straight edge could do these things, I would be out in my tool box right now.

good write.

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

2 posted 2009-08-18 11:28 AM

Thanks Yodawg. I appreciate you reading it.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-08-18 11:32 AM

Yo Paul,

You be careful with that knife. It can cut you three ways, deep, wide, and often.

I liked the thought behind this fine poem, as I've always had a knife fetish.

Bobby

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

4 posted 2009-08-18 12:42 PM

I'm awful careful robbus.

Thanks.

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

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