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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2009-08-17 05:24 PM


close to the vest, these cards I hold
best in privacy, can and do unfold

and do not think of your last addition
for in your presence I seek admission
the words like movies pour fruition
take heed and hear my new rendition

for if I voiced a comment make
t'would form a tryst, a conquest fake
by foes and friends for selfish sake
I read synposis for the take

for by the pool
you did request
a reading from
this beating breast

for "In Her Shoes", I did do read
of romance, sorrow, and mourning feed
of Claire's clear view
I do not swoo
poetry lovers
and friends renew

and to my list add with permission
Meet Joe Black, the angel's mission

[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (08-17-2009 06:57 PM).]

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ninjawild
Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33
u.s. army
1 posted 2009-08-17 05:42 PM


this is captivating.. kudos!..
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