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peaceseaker
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0 posted 2009-08-17 03:14 PM




Timeless Enchantment


Picnic basket full of wine, cheese and grapes,
Holding hands and skipping for an escape.
Discovering the shade of an old oak tree,
We settle down for a romantic feast.

Barefoot we dance beneath vanilla skies,
Watching wisps of pink slowly drifting by.
Whispering breezes echoing our love,
Stealing kisses under shadows above.

Birds dipping and drifting high above winds,
Wings casting for prayer of days never end
Timeless enchantment of a love affair
Our childhood hearts play on without a care.

[This message has been edited by peaceseaker (08-18-2009 05:03 AM).]

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ninjawild
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1 posted 2009-08-17 05:46 PM


"Our childhood hearts play on without a care."

love it.. its an awesome thought that many of us still have.. or some have still in time out from ourselves.. kudos!..

Alwye
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In the space between moments
2 posted 2009-08-17 05:50 PM


Sounds like a wonderful day...lovely.
peaceseaker
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3 posted 2009-08-19 06:19 AM


Thank you so much for the read and lovely comment's much appreciated....ps
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