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jody5
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0 posted 2009-08-17 03:39 AM




I grieved the death of you of us
I thought you would grieve it too.
You went out and partied that night
As thought all those years didn’t matter
I grieved of what never existed for you
I am changing my life for the good.
Life tells me something better will come
You were not Gods chosen one.
I still have friends and my faith so I’m calm
I have hardened my heart against you
So you can not come back to me anymore
It’s over now for good.  I want to be free
I could forgive you, but I couldn’t forget
You made the choice to move on…….

© Copyright 2009 Kimberly Benton - All Rights Reserved
ramisf
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1 posted 2009-08-17 07:30 AM


You have been chosen for a reason and you should always change your life for the good because nothing better will come otherwise

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2009-08-17 09:08 AM


hard truth you are mastering in your direct words
Yoinn
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3 posted 2009-08-17 01:21 PM


I love the strength that comes out in this poem. Good Job

Yoin

jody5
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4 posted 2009-08-17 10:27 PM


Ramisf; I agree and I did,
Thank you...
Hugs Kimberly

Inkgoddess; This is so absolutely true!

Yoinn;  Thank you Sometime's, we just have to speak up and say no.  I did and I moved on to a much happier space...


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