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Comfortable Wave |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ The fog lies low on summer mornings painting the seaside in water colors. It gets under my skin and cools my senses clouding my vision to tears. It rolls in slow motion hovering at the edge of a mountain top alluding to the possibilities of perfect storms and restless lovers. Until the sun breaks streaking across the sand rolling backwards out to sea like prisms stung along the edge of the horizon. The fog lies still and serene in a comfortable wave soft and smooth shading the darkness from my eyes. The salt mist leaves a kiss on the tip of my lips drawn to your silhouette in the sky. ~*~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (08-15-2009 09:04 AM).] |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely. You make me long for fog, m'dear. xoxoxo Alison |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Fog never looked so good. Love your sea views. (second stanza, maybe alluding instead of eluding?) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"The salt mist leaves a kiss on the tip of my lips drawn to your silhouette in the sky." How beautiful is that ! Some day I shall see that shore~~  M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you ladies, I am so pleased to have you read me. Thanks to Kacy for spell checking me too.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lovely Lori! I'm a fog-lover from way back. As a little girl I lived in New Brunswick on Canada's east coast. I have always found fog to be calming ~ and mysterious. It's also great for one's complexion!  A lovely write ~ and a soothing read! Thank you!  Linda |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Wherever this is, I would sure love to live there. A worthy legacy is the irrevocable consequence of dreaming. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
always a pleasure to view you bluezy... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - serene at the edge of the sea. Lovely... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is ever so lovely bluesy girl. Hugs~Nancy |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I can feel your seabreezes and the gentle mist spreading from your west to my east coast as our oceans connect. So nice to splash along in your sea thoughts |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I enjoyed your write about the fog. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Beautiful and soft like the fog itself, Blues. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I can taste the air of your words, super tremendously! ... does this mean we just kissed?? : ) Ct |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bluesy gal - this is so lovely. You took us there and let us linger.  Helen |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Beautiful write Much enjoyed. Hugs Kimberly |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
alluding to the possibilities of perfect storms and restless lovers If I ever want refreshed, I read you. L, H |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
now it's my treat, beautiful poetess... love it when you write! shellie . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I am thrilled to see each of you here. Thank you so much for your kind words, and for taking the time to read and reply. Hugs all around and around~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tried to pick a favorite line but loved them all i truly love a view from the sea |
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