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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-08-14 08:07 AM


you had on those little girl eyes again
like I was wearing christmas kinds of buttons
and you wanted to open them earlier then usual
so you could wear me all over your caution

with my wrong side out closest to your inside
I didn't mind how you used my hands there
like the new shoes you found to be too big
but you said you liked dressing up in them

pretending you were grown up and being unladylike
with all of your woman junk still mostly on
as if we were alone in those crowds around us
dancing in the mud of our own sand castle songs

we wrote words in the sand with our fingers
and you covered your mouth with your hands
then rolled your eyes at what we had written
as if it was the first time you had seen love

spelled in so many different ways of lovely


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daark

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2009-08-14 08:21 PM


gonna get me some of those Christmas buttons....

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spelled in so many different ways of lovely.
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You're sweet, and I love your stuff!  

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-08-15 03:16 PM


Thanks babe....rode by the old buckhorn a few hours ago and smiled...
pretty1
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3 posted 2009-08-15 09:33 PM


"spelled in so many different ways of lovely"

Your words conjure up such wonderful images.  Thank you as always for sharing!

Pretty1

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4 posted 2009-08-15 09:51 PM


I think I'll just say, "Wow!"
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2009-08-15 11:35 PM


I'd love it if you pinned me with or without your button
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-08-16 06:54 AM


ms pretty...thank you babe...

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ms ali-san, if you turned that over it would say "MOM"..thanks babe

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ms inki..you make me want to mess up your hair...thanks lady friend


Oklahoma Rose
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7 posted 2009-08-16 10:18 PM


I really enjoyed reading this.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-08-17 07:19 AM


ms Rose..humble thanks lady!!
unboundpoetess
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9 posted 2009-08-17 05:57 PM


D

My favorite lines have been taken.
I'll just grin and read again.
H

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Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2009-08-18 06:22 AM


ms UBP...I do enjoy you using them over, thanks lady
Margherita
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11 posted 2009-12-19 05:36 PM


I think I just found the right kind of lovely here to read and reread and to enjoy deeply!

Simply wonderful!

Love,
Margherita

Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2009-12-20 01:56 AM


"On a day like today, we passed the time away...."  

this does drift lovely, sand or snow, and maybe a few air castles, too, for good measure, just for a wayward wind?

~K

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2009-12-20 07:21 AM


ms mar, thank you ms for the turnoverofleaves..

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ms kl...every day is a dream if we let ourselves sleep partway through it?  thanks ms

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