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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-08-12 07:41 PM


              summer passages

From these endlessly rolling, velvet hills
broad-forest sounds of summer passing
sweep through the moonlit window,
teasing hosts of evening shadows
  and delicious, variant emotions
assembled in this twilight dream,
in deep, fine anticipation of a secret
age-old friend … the Autumn wind.

            --- b. e. adams (8/12/09)


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GBride
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1 posted 2009-08-12 09:13 PM


Excellent Write!!!
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2 posted 2009-08-13 02:07 AM


Bruce, he's blowing lightly here. Had my first frost on my car windshield this morning and the geese are moving.  I love autumn.  This is a beautiful poem that you have written, my friend.

Alison

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3 posted 2009-08-13 04:29 AM


Ah, the autumn wind...such a refreshing thought in the midst of this heat wave.
                                Ida

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-08-14 06:29 PM


Enjoyed...James
BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2009-08-14 08:09 PM


You combine beauty and emotions in such a way.

I love reading you, dreampoet~

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6 posted 2009-08-15 08:32 AM


It's just now becoming summer-like weather. But autumn is my favorite time of year.
Beautiful imagery, Bruce.  

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7 posted 2009-08-17 03:41 PM


I just LOVED This...the title..short but oh so full of life in the images and the seasons...what a write! peaceseaker
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8 posted 2009-08-19 03:41 AM


excellent and refreshing, a very enjoyable read.

yann

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