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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
the ticking of the clock serves to remind that what we have is fragile--this thing we call time never know if it is the last day or if our life has just begun only know that I should hold on as tight as I can and not run no one said it would be easy love just doesn't work that way we fight and continue to struggle simply making it day by day these tears that rain on my pillow they serve a purpose-to make me stronger I will fight for you some things just take longer your soul lights up my world it brought a smile the size of the ocean to my face you're beautiful inside and out finally feel like I'm home...found my safe place that clock on the wall all but forgotten time still ticking but I can't hear it as much now I know it will all work out...everything someway...someday...somehow "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Apparently we are on the same wavelength, as I have been thinking of time and its fragile nature lately too. Great poem, and welcome to Passions!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Amy! Welcome aboard! At times, Tempus Fugit (time flies), and at others it just drags by tick...tock, tick...tock. The frustrating part is that it flies when we're having fun ~ and slows to a crawl when we are not! I enjoyed your entire poem, however, the positive, hopeful closing stanza brought a big smile to my face. "that clock on the wall all but forgotten time still ticking but I can't hear it as much now I know it will all work out...everything someway...someday...somehow"  Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel  |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
Thanks for the warm welcome. I'm actually no stranger to Pip. This is Aimster..I have forgotten my login info (been a while) so I had to register with a new name Take care, Amy "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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