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Unraveling
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Unraveling |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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I see us starting to tear, worn~down, thread~bare, Right here, over there, Unraveling… Don’t know how to mend it I can’t sew, darn or knit, So I just pretend that it’s not Unraveling… And a whip~stitch won’t fix it. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Interesting write, brneyedgrly. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Brneyedgrly, Don't worry too much about it Hon. Everything will work out in time. Love Bobby |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks for stopping in, march... ~yo bob...it did work out fine...it unraveled |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This was a great imagery laden poem to describe this. Fantastic stuff. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~guy...as always, a pleasure to hear from you : ) |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Brneyedgly I'm pleased to hear it has unravelled and everything is all right now. Alls well that ends well. Take care. Lindsay |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I like how this felt in my mouth read aloud. Clever, H |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Try knitting something new, brown eyes.  -P Thirty bits of glass had become my teeth, |
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MinSW Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 53Sri Lanka |
dearest, i was so very much touched...it hurts when things unravel i guess...bt, it's much harder when u have a worn out thng.. so be happy.. all is for the best.. btw, nice write..sums up al the emotions in a few simple lines.. love and hope, Min |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sweet, linds... the unraveling was freeing... and necessary... thanks : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~unbound... high praise from you! glad you took the time to read it aloud... thank you : ) |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~sweet paulie... i think i need lessons... |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~dearest min... yes...it's hard to hold on to frayed edges... thanks for reading : ) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
brneyedgrly - from your words you seem to be no longer unraveling, this is a good thing... BC |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
~thanks, dear bill, for stopping in to read : ) |
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